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Chapter VI
SUMMARY OF FINDINGS, CONCLUSION AND RECOMMENDATIONS

This research compared the preferred dating and courtship styles of the male and female students of the University of the Philippines Cebu College.
The study was conducted at the University of the Philippines Cebu College located in Lahug, Cebu City. The respondents of the study were fifty college students (25 male and 25 female students) of different courses and year levels for the academic year of 2011-2012.

SUMMARY OF FINDINGS
Based on the results that were generated, the researchers (achieved the following findings: ) were able to sum up the following findings:
1. Both male and female students have the knowledge on the different styles of dating and courtship. “Constantly hanging out”, “dinner engagements”, “frequent exchange of calls and/or romantic messages”, “gift giving”, “serenading with romantic songs”, “constant company” and “looking for mediators” are the dating and courtship styles known to the respondents.
2. Among the different dating and courtship styles, “frequent exchange of calls and/or romantic messages”, “gift giving” and “constant company” are the top three most preferred dating and courtship style of the male students while “constantly hanging out”, “dinner engagements” and “frequent exchange of calls and/or romantic messages” are the top three most preferred dating and courtship styles of the female students. On the other hand, both the male and female students favored the dating and courtship style of “looking for mediators” the least.
3. In terms of other factors that may affected (faulty) on the student’s preferred dating and courtship style, the technology driven society, with 81 respondents who strongly agreed and 91 agreed and with weighted mean of 2, is the only factor that have affected the preferred dating and courtship style of the students significantly. The students are receptive to the beneficial functions of technology towards dating and courtship. This coincides with the previous findings wherein both male and female students include the dating and courtship style of frequent exchange of calls and/or of romantic messages to their top three most preferred dating or courtship style. (I don’t understand.very confusing structure)

4. Although the technology driven society (italicize) is the only factor that have affected the student’s dating and courtship style preferences, it (who found out? The society?) has found out that parental influence has affected the preference of students who preferred “serenading with romantic songs” the most and students who preferred “looking for mediators” the most with a percentage of 70% and 100% respectively. Also, religious affiliation has affected the preference of the students who preferred “gift giving” the most and students who preferred “constant company”, both having a percentage of 80%. Moreover, economic condition have greatly influence the preference of the students who preferred “dinner engagements as their dating style.(pleas express clearly and simply)

CONCLUSIONS
The main objective of the study was to compare the preferred dating styles of the male and female students of the University of the Philippines. It aimed to determine the different dating styles known to the students and to identify the preferred dating styles of the male and female students. It aimed to find out the factors that affect their preferred dating styles and to explain the students' preferred dating styles in the context of (a) technology, (b) parental influence, (c) economic condition and (d) religious affiliation. (remove)
Based on the results of the study, the top most preferred dating styles of the respondents differs. However, males and females both prefer "frequent exchange of calls and/or romantic messages" to be in the top 3 of their preferred dating/courtship style.
Males also prefer to be in constant company with the person they are dating. A guy wants the girl he is dating, to think that he is serious about her. He also wants to show that he's happy when he's around his dating partner. (huh? I don’t understand the second sentence)
Males also prefer giving gifts when they are dating/courting. They want to make their "future" partners feel that they (who? Partner or guys?) are being valued. It's also a guy's one way of showing his dating partner, that he cares for her.
For the females, they prefer to constantly hang out with their dating partners. That is because, a girl wants to measure his partner's affection towards her (awkward). When they hang out together, the girl feels like the guy's saying "Hey everyone! I'm dating this girl and I love her"! Meaning to say, the guy is proud of her. Furthermore, as students, everyone have hectic lives and everyday can be quite a handful. So for a girl, if a guy wants to spend weekends with her or hang out with her, it could mean that the guy is really interested about her. (choppy.join)
Dinner engagement is also one of the females' most preferred dating/courtship styles.
In conclusion, ......
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RECOMMENDATIONS
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1. For the future researchers that will conduct studies related to our topic, the researchers highly recommend them to broaden the scope of the study and gather more respondents from different universities and consider non-student respondents to be able to note significant comparisons between the dating and courtship styles of the male and female.
2. For the students, to make dating and courtship a wonderful experience that will enhance and support a lasting relationship between couples. And to maintain a sustainable and lasting relationship, find common dating and courtship preferences and learn to understand one's difference with another.(faulty.shift in person.fragment)
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