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There are two theories that explain why females choose a particular set of attributes over the other. First is the Byrne's Reinforcement or Reward Theory by Burrhus Frederic Skinner (year?
Second is the (remove the) Piaget's Theory of Cognitive Development by Jean Piaget which show (subject verb agreement) that those females or girls aging 16-18 are mature and rational enough to make such choices.)which states that people are attracted to those who in some way make them feel good, or are attracted to those who remind them of people that they enjoy being around.
The researchers are curious as to what is the highest priority and the criteria girls set in picking a guy and the result of that curiousity, the research formulated this study. (comma splice)
This also study this(faulty) aimed to give and help the guys in becoming someone the girls want. But it’s not the researchers intention to change the guy in order to be liked by girls. This study provides a set (tense consistency)
It will still be the guys (check possessive form) decision whether to comply to the criteria the girls set.
The researchers would also like to know why female students set these criteria. (transition for coherence) The researchers focused on the 16-18 age range since at this age, most teenage girls become attracted to the opposite sex and may or may not start forming heterosexual relationship with them.
The objective of this study is to find out the criteria of UP Cebu female students aging 16-18 set in choosing their ideal guy. (past tense)
This study aimed to know the following: