estrecho,fernandez chap 2 reposting

estrecho fernandez chap 2

1. “Sex is everywhere”, (place comma inside quotation)
2. from “the Starr Report, watched thong-clad teens gyrate on Spring Break cable specials, or read the cover of nearly any women’s magazine in the grocery check-out line”. (refer to comment no. 1)
3. Freeman and Gardner were only a very small proportion of the many other studies (they are people not studies) and articles made regarding the topic teenagers and sex.
4. “less of a man”, Stamouli added. (refer to comment no.1)
5. Friends being the number one ranking cause for gaining such information resulted to (in) a
6. an article by Irish health online (year)
7. stated that it’s (spell out)
8. both parties don’t (spell out) show much
9. going through, that’s why (rephrase)
10. Fogart and Wyatt (year, since this is in another para) also
11. Our goal is to see whether gender, sources of information and purpose of learning really does (subject verb agreement)