cavanlit chap 6 (check comments on selected sentences below)

2. Number of years since the first use of computer was theoretically insignificant since symptoms of brain altering can be shown in age 7 but during that age, the respondents were just starting to use computers. It is also statistically insignificant since it yield (check) a Pearson Product-Moment Correlation value of 0.015813339 which is already very close to zero.


3. The average respondent would consume 4.5217 hours of computer usage at home while 1.5557 hours at school. Respondent who use (check) their computers at home have lesser retention ability as compared to those who use it in school.

Based on the results, there is indeed an inverse relationship between the number of hours of computer usage and the retention ability of the students. The more the respondents use their computers in either at home or at school, the lesser their retention ability level has been.

The results were exactly what were expected by the researchers. A greater amount of computer usage would lead to lower memory retention.
(so what can you say about it? please comment /give your own insight or analysis on the answer to the main problem.)

1. The study is limited to 10 respondents only. This 10 people (check) might not be a perfect mixture of all the computer science students making the study somehow biased. I recommend that the next researchers shall choose their proponents properly if they are to choose this type of study.

2. Some respondent (check) most especially in Group B have higher academic capability as compared to Group A, this situation (comma splice) might cause unfairness to the results. The future researchers shall avoid giving bias or maybe screen their respondents so that lapses in the study will be avoided.


8. There are already tons of media devices that are available today. It might be great if future researchers would include these technologies. Old media can also be studied such as television and cellphones but it would be much better if we (shift of person) will focus on higher innovations such as tablets and smartphones.

9. Future researchers shall give focus to “fast-paced photographic images” that can modify customary brain improvement. Since the researchers haven’t tackled much on the scientific realms of the study. (fragment)