deguit olavides chap 5(comments on following selected sentences )

The data above implies that oval-shaped face is the most ideal face shape of the ideal guy of the female respondents since according to Rogers (2002), the said shape perfectly fits whatever a guy's clothes are. The data also shows implies (faulty) that a manly face is not at all popular to girls in the middle adolescents stage since it only ranked second.
Lip shape is another part of the physical appearance of the guy which makes him ideal for a girl. Lips ranked seventh in Strovny's (n.d) survey about the top ten male body parts women want for the reason that is looks (faulty) appealing to guys. Table 1.4 shows the three different lip shape and the female respondent's choice.
The data implies that the female respondents don't want a lips (remove a ) that is too sexy which is the full lips and lips that is not so appealing, the thin lips. The female respondents only want a not so sexy, but a little bit appealing lips for their ideal guy.
The same with the eye color, the data implies that most of the female respondents chose a hair color that suits and describes a Filipino men (remove a).
It shows that the female respondents would want their ideal guy to have the same nationality as them since most of the characteristics chosen by the respondents describes (subject verb agreement) a Filipino man.
The third factor the female respondents consider in choosing their ideal guy is the guy's mental capacity. Men having the ability to to (check) solve problems make a woman secure (Jones, 2011).
If a guy has a good mental capacity, he has the ability to make good decisions in life and this is what most of the woman look for in a guy (faulty)
. Based on the data above, 26 female respondents said that they strongly agree that they want their ideal guy not to smoke; 3 female respondents agreed; 1 disagreed. (spell out numbers below 10) apply this rule to the whole chapter
The table above show (check) the female respondent's agreement and/or disagreement on the second statement in the vices category which is if they like guys who don't drink alcoholic beverages.
The table above show (check) the female respondent's agreement and/or disagreement on the third statement in the vices category which is if they like guys who don't spend too much time playing computer games.
The data above implies that although there are many female respondents who doesn't (faulty) want their ideal guy to spend too much time playing computer games, to the over-all sample population, it is okay for them that their ideal guy spends too much time playing computer games since it gives them happiness.
The table revealed (Tense consistency; you used present tense earlier as table shows or table implies) that only 6 of the female respondents strongly agreed about their guy attend church activities.
The data implies that a female respondent may not like a guy who attends church activities since their time for each other might be lessen (ed).
Family is a place where you can be yourself. It is a place where you’re admitted for what you are, thus there are no terms and conditions. (is it a place? Change)
We all know that you (shift in person.be consistent with third person) can tell how a guy will treat you by the way he treats his mom.
Most guys don't think girls notice the little things. Well, they do. Girls notice when you send an email for no other reason than just to say “hi.” (same issue)
If one is honest, you can easily trust them. honesty in a relationship is vitally important because it gives us the assurance that we can trust and rely on the person we love. (Same issue)
The table showed (tense consistency) that fifteen female college students strongly agreed that they like guys who are close to their mother.

(check your table here.the fourth and fifth entries are the same) the table above shows the female college students’ overall ranking of the attributes of their ideal guy. The data shows that the students like guys who have a good personality hence got the most number of votes for the Rank 1. And then followed by the Mental Capacity category which means that female students prefer guys who are intelligent. The physical appearance of the guy came third. Socio-Economic Status and Social Group vied for the 4th and 5th rank. (check table for this)
The data implies that the female respondents look for guys who have a good personality first rather than good looks. (awkward.rewrite)