razonable salas chap 1

According to Facebook Statistics, there are more than 600 active users of Facebook and these people spend 700 billion minutes every month using this online application. (source?)Thus, this implies that a large portion of mankind’s population use Facebook for different purposes.
But, what is it in Facebook that makes mankind (awkward) go crazy about it? What enjoyment/entertainment does it provide to the users that made them be addicted to it? (Rephrase the last part)
All of the mentioned elements play a big role in mankind’s (choose a better term) social relationships towards others.
An example is that, a user changes his/her relationship status from being single to in a relationship (awkward.italicize the item to make it a noun)
Thus, one did not just change his/her relationship status into being “in a relationship” but actually change it into “in an open relationship” (either quotes or italics.only one) since by publishing it to the public is no difference as opening one’s door for possible intruders that might ruin one’s relationship with their loved ones.
miscommunication and arguments since both parties will start to consider opinions from a third party which is consist (which consists of people) of the people that surrounds (faulty) them both in online and in real life.
Social networking sites are main elements in maintaining long distance relationships since it is the only way to maintain their relationship in the absence of their loved ones. (awkward, going round the bush)
Thus, this leads to the researchers’ realization that there is a need to conduct a study that will determine the role of Facebook to romantic relationships of the University of the Philippines Cebu College computer science students especially when (that) these individuals are frequently using the internet.

Objectives of the Study
Parallel to the identified sub problems, the following are the objectives that should be achieved as a conclusion of this study: (tense consistency.use past tense)
The parents’ main role to their children is to guide them, thus, parents awareness (punctuation. possessive form) of the effects of too much usage of Facebook can help them in giving their advice to their sons/daughters to maintain a balance between their frequency in using Facebook and the actual face to face interaction with their friends.