perez tabaloc chap 5 3rd draft (comments in parentheses in between sentences)

Based on the information tabulated in Table 1 and 2, the current study has a total of 30 respondents that was comprised of three groups. The first group comprises the askal dogg (check) owners, the second group comprises the purebred dog owners, and the last group comprises the non-dog owners.

Each of the group was composed of five (5) 1st year and five (5) 2nd year UP Cebu college students, with the summation of ten (10) respondents for every group. (tense consistency.comprised and comprises)

The common stereotypes on Askal dogs due to common community ideas that askals eat almost everything given to them by their owners.

The following are faulty sentences:

Based on the graph above, majority of the respondents agreed with the statement; “It is okay to feed askals table scraps (lamaw).”

The second statement in this set is; “It is okay to beat an askal when it misbehaves.”

The graph above shows a complex result. It shows that there were zero out of ten (join these two sentences since they are choppy if written separately)

The third statement of this set is, “Askals are cheap to maintain.”
With this, the researchers included the statement; “Askals are not qualified for dog shows.” as the fourth statement of this set.

The respondent stated; “For example, an askal dog is good at adopting on different environments while many, if not all purebred dogs are fragile when it comes to rough environments.

because these dogs showcases

he said respondent also strongly pointed out that the people who will judge the comparison between the two kinds of dogs also has unique definitions, perception, and categorizations that they should consider in judging.

The said respondent actually cited an example. She said; “For example, a little girl likes a cute dog. So she will say that purebred dogs are better than askal dogs. (choppy)

According again to the table, majority of the respondents disagreed to the second statement; “Its okay to beat an askal when it misbehaves.” and also to the fourth statement; “Askal are not qualified to join dog shows.”

These two statement are statements (redundant.shorten) that are purely propagated from the observations of the researchers.

Lastly, the results showed that many respondents remained undecided on the last statement; “Askals are better than purebred dogs.”

The researchers perceived that this statement is too subjective. Thus, the respondents have to consider too many factors before they can decide whether to agree or to disagree on the given statement. Yet, the fact that majority were undecided, the researchers perceived and analyzed that the respondents do not apply this stereotype on askals. Because if they do, they would have agreed right away with the statement given. Thus, this implies that many, if not all people in the community, specifically the respondents, do not label a kind of dog as better than the other kinds. (don’t speculate without basis. use theories or related lit to explain the result.)


Out of five (5) statements given, two (2) statements were agreed by the majority, another two (2) statements were disagreed by the majority, and for the last one (1) statement, majority of the respondents remained undecided. With this, it is right to say that not all five statements in this given set are rightful to be treated as valid stereotypes towards askal dogs. Thus, the researchers concluded that only very few stereotypes are applied by the respondents on askal dogs. And these stereotypes are just those which states that askal dogs are cheap. (did you compute the weighted mean? What is the average/overall response?bank on that)

That is why this set; “Impression on Askal Dog Owners” is included in the questionnaire.
The interviewed respondent said; “It is observable in the community today that, not just middle class families own askal dogs.

One of the common characteristics of askal dogs, according to many people, is their tendency to always misbehave. That leads to the idea that askal dogs are uncontrollable. (choppy.join) Some also says(faulty) that majority of these askal dogs have negative behavioral attitude because they can be seen sprawling and misbehaving in public streets. Having; “Askal owners are friendlier.” as one of the statements in this set, the researchers assumed that if many disagrees with it, askal dogs extend their characteristics to their owners.

accordance to the given graph above, eight (8) non-dog owners and one (1) purebred dog owner comprises (subject verb issue)

These nine respondents are 45% of the whole sample population of this current set. This population chose the majority choice. (awkward) Therefore, the researchers concluded that many people in the community, specifically the respondents, apply this stereotype towards askal dog owners. Faulty paragraph)

This statement is included as the last statement

Again, according to Kelley’s Model of the Attribution Theory, which was first introduced in chapter II, in order for the impression applied by the respondents to be valid, the results or their answers to the statements should be consistent. In the case of this set of statements, the results have not showed consistency because these have equally been divided. Out of five (5) statements given, only the first two statements were disagreed by the majority, only the last two statements were agreed by the majority, and majority of the respondents were undecided for the third statement. With this, it is right to say that not all five statements in this given set are appropriate to be treated as valid stereotypes on askal dog owners. Thus, the researchers concluded that only very few stereotypes are applied by the respondents. And these stereotypes are just those which states that askal dog owners take less responsibility towards their dog. Moreover, an example of this stereotype is that askal dog owners only consider their dog as a form of security measure. (please get the weighted mean to get the overall impression towards dog owners.see the works of saripada mangmang in their blog)

In addition, when the researchers asked an askal owner and a non-dog owner about their reason on conforming to the stereotype, both of them said that It is what they have observed. (quote)
Comparing the three groups of owners, the researchers analyzed that; purebred dog owners do not conform to the stereotype because they know what is true about their dogs.
The researchers considered the statement; “Purebred dogs are only fed with dog food or meat.” (careless use of punctuation) as a common stereotype towards purebred dogs because they observed that many purebred dogs in the community are fed with dog food or meat.

Statement 4 is, “Purebred dogs are expensive to maintain.”, because the researchers observed that many purebred dog owners spend so much when it comes to the foods and the hygiene of their dogs.

This statement was given, to

. In addition, an interviewed purebred dog owner said; “My Shitzu needs to maintain a proper hygiene because her hair always crumple up if not properly cut and shampooed.
The interviewed respondent said; “Mahal kaayo ang

Based on the table shown above, majority disagreed on the first statement; “Purebred dogs are for dog shows.” and on the third statement; “Purebred dogs are only feed with dog foods or meat.” (many sentences are like this.please read again your work and correct this error)

Because majority of the respondents agreed to these statements, it can be inferred that many of the respondents are aware that purebred dog owners invest a big amount for their dogs and that the respondents believe that because of this big amount, purebred dogs are expensive and thus, purebred dog owners do not beat their dogs. (wordy)

For the impression on purebred dog owners, only two types of respondents were required to answer; (colon) the askal owners and the non-dog owners.

The researchers again took into account the idea from Tuan (1980). Tuan (1980) emphasized that the owner extends his self to his possessions. (choppy.join)