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Hihara is one of the many second year anime enthusiasts in the University of the Philippines Cebu College who experience (agreement?) the same situations.
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Anime is a blanket term, shortened from the word 'animation' and is often used to refer to the animated versions of comics that originated from Japan called "manga". Anime is an increasing world phenomena. More and more Anime series, mangas and movies come out each year and with that, the population of Anime fans around the world keep on increasing as well. The popularity of a particular Anime title that became a hit TV series usually lasts for years. Even though the show has ended on the TV station where it was aired, fans will search for their own copies of the series and watch it over and over.
So, with Hihara, nstead (check) of studying and reviewing for exams or making projects to meet the deadlines, anime fans like Hihara procrastinate and postpone the tasks they need to do to watch anime and read manga.
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Our study aims to find out the effects of watching anime and reading manga onto the study habits of the Second Year College students of the University of the Philippines Cebu College.
Specifically, this study was (omit was) attempted to answer the following sub-problems: